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Extrene Darkness..

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1:15 am
April 22, 2010


nouna..

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I just buried the kids i never had..

demolished the house i never built..

killed the dreams i had..

Hurt people i loved..

The giant of guilt eating my soul..

Sadness clouds fill my eyes..

Having painful heart beats..

my soul is wandering lonely..

seeing people as ghosts..

living in a dark compartment..

Extreme darkness..

feeling cold..

wishing these non-stop nightmares end..

w rabenna yostorrrrrrrr……….

dr.nouna(retired juliet)

8:51 pm
April 28, 2010


Amr Ehab

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posts 54

I guess you should have a look on some modern english poetry to know how to create images.. The feelings u have can be writen in a better form :)

 

Best of Luck!

فلتطلق سراح الروح من أسر الجسد.. اكسر القيد السرمديّ.. دعها تحلق عاليًا.. دون خوف.. نحو النور المقدس


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