Looking For Gold | A LOVE LETTER BY AN OLD LADY..

Post edited 9:26 pm – April 20, 2010 by nouna..
Post edited 9:28 pm – April 20, 2010 by nouna..

Baby, 
When we grow old i'd love to see your face, How building our life affected you, what years made to you… 
Wrinkles..your wrinkles are our hard times..they are so special to me, because they make me sure I chose the right one, they show me how a great man you are.. 
White hair….OMG! every white hair reminds me of the reason why I need you beside me.. every time you helped me making the right decision..it made me who I am.. 
p.s u look cute in white hair baby :p 
your retarded health..reminds me with your heart…which was the first thing to attract me ..how you are capable of keeping all our fears,hopes & dreams inside it.. 
Now when I look in your eyes I still see that enthusiastic guy I fell in love with .. 
You old man is the reality which exceeded my dreams.. every girl dreams to live in a fairy tale but I ve a fairy tale of my own..beside I feel like no other girl felt before..i feel like me… 
                                        love, 
                                                your girl..

Post edited 10:31 pm – April 20, 2010 by ♥ A M O U R ♥

Simple and romantic.. I like the images and the emotional load..

but since it is the first time to read for you, I just want to suggest few things:

1- Revise the tenses..

2- The last paragraph is so cliche..

Welcome on borad, Nourhan

and you are welcome indeed