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1:04 pm
January 26, 2012


drsamoor

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Sit in a cafe or any crowded area. Write down snippets of conversation you hear. Listen to the people around you, how they talk, what words they use. Having done this, you can practice finishing their conversations. Write your version of what comes next in the conversation. Match their style. You can write one conversation or more.
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HEART, we will forget him! You and I, to-night! You may forget the warmth he gave, I will forget the light. When you have done, pray tell me, That I my thoughts may dim; Haste! lest while you’re lagging, I may remember him! Emily Dickinso

11:28 pm
February 5, 2012


drsamoor

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بعد نصف يوم تقريبا من المشي في شارع المعز’ جلست علي إحدي الدكك الحجرية أمام مسجد الحاكم بأمر الله أتأمل مدي بشاعة الأضواء الملونة المسلطة علي هذا الجمال المجرد من أي تعقيدات. " مخلوش حاجة في البلد دي إلا و علموا عليها!" أتحدث لنفسي بصوت مسموع حتي يقاطعني صوتهما

" جبنا كل الحاجات؟"

" اه خلاص, بس خلينا شوية نرتاح و النبي"

" طب ياختي أنا قلت حاجة؟ بس إديني بق مية"

" في الشنطة أهي"

" بس إرتاحي علي طول’ مش عايزين نتأخر"

" ما طول عمرنا بنتأخر!"

" لا بيخطفوا الستات دلوقتي!"

" و مالك عاملة زي الراديو اللي كان في مسرحية ريا و سكينة"

" قصدك سعيد صالح"

" مفيش حاجة! ما تخافيش!"

" لأ ماخافش إيه, انا سمعت إنهم خطفوا إتنين في شبرا إنهاردة"

" شبرا مصر و لا شبرا المظلات"

" أهي أي شبرا! ده إنت رذلة أوي صحيح!"

" و سمعتي من مين"

" ما هما اللي قالوا"

" هما مين؟"

" جارتي, قالولها"

" أيوة هما مين اللي قالولها"

" بقولك إيه! يلا بينا! عايزة أشرب شاي قبل ما أنام"

HEART, we will forget him! You and I, to-night! You may forget the warmth he gave, I will forget the light. When you have done, pray tell me, That I my thoughts may dim; Haste! lest while you’re lagging, I may remember him! Emily Dickinso

9:26 pm
February 6, 2012


Haidy the writer

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Post edited 9:30 pm – February 6, 2012 by Haidy the writer
Post edited 9:31 pm – February 6, 2012 by Haidy the writer


Moving quickly before anyone rose, to capture every moment of that morning. I hoped not to be lazy, and to desert the bed earlier. The meeting was at 10.30 am, and to get there on time, I only needed thirty minutes or less than that – as traffic was not jammed at that hour -. Still, I had to make sure that I took everything I wanted, but such hurry was about to make me forget the company I was to spend the time with.

Waiting for the subway nervously till it arrived, welcoming its guests by opening its doors, I stepped into it with a smile drawing on my face, as I found, unusually, a space for me and my company. It was high time for my company to start telling me its story when the subway moved, I discovered few pages of it for five minutes only, because another unavoidable live story began without any introduction, featuring two young girls

Voice 1 "No, I insist. It's a fascinating, I can't figure out why you are against it! It's only you who think otherwise"

Voice 2 "First of all, it's not fascinating at all, and for your record it's not only me who sees it not good."

Voice 1 " Those who have no taste."

Voice 2 " They are very gifted writers, and they are many but I can only name ten of them"

Voice 1 " I can name them too. They are jealous as they are competitors."

Voice 2 " Why don't you accept difference? It is art. Not everyone sees it the way you do."

Voice 1 " I know it is art but still there are masterpieces that no one can argue about."

Voice 2 " Wrong. Even masterpieces are questionable; you know that Shaw and Tolstoy didn't consider Shakespeare's plays masterpieces except for Hamlet."

Voice 1 " Exactly, as I told you earlier. It is Jealousy."

Voice 2 " I am really shocked that you like it. You – in particular – should hate it."

Voice 1 asked surprisingly "Why?"

Voice 2 " I won't tell you, you should buy the book and read it, then you will know why."

Voice 1 " Deal, but on one condition, you buy it and read it too."

Voice 2 " No problem, once I am going to prove that you're wrong."

Then my station arrived and I felt sorry for giving them a chance to start another story.

1:31 am
February 7, 2012


nashwa nagy

Member

posts 63

برز صوتها جليا رغم الزحام 
كنت عالقه في احدى إشارات المرور وكعادتها شوارع القاهرة يعلوا الصخب أجواءها  
انها ظهيرة يوم شتوي تتأرجح فيه السحب ما بين الكثافة القاتمه والعبور البطئ الذي يسمح لقليل من أشعة الشمس ان تصل الي جبيني …
لم أميز بداية حوارها في هاتفها الخلوي ومع اقتراب خطواتها من نافذة السيارة سمعت بوضوح صراخها وهي تخاطبه قائله : 
" أنا اصلا ما يشرفنيش انك تكون اب لابني … "
لم اكتفي لسماع صوتها الغاضب المهدد بل ملت على زجاج النافذة على أتمكن من التعرف على ملامح صاحبة الصوت المخترق ..ولأول مره اجد جدوى من انتظار تحول إشارة المرور للون الاخضر  
تبدو امرأة في منتصف العمر تسير على النجيله الخضراء الممتدة في وسط الطريق  تمد الخطي مسرعة كي تلحق بالحافلة المتواجدة في اول الصف 
أتابعها في محاوله لفك رموز حكايتها ولو عن طريق قراءة ملامحها 
لكنها تذوب وسط الزحام بعدما تحولت دائرة إشارة المرور للون الاخضر لتتسارع السيارات للعبور الي الجانب الاخر بجنون …. 
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